The development of tourism contributes to English becoming the most prominent language in the world some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one langua

It is thought by some that english becomes most used language in the world which leads english to be only spoken language
in the universe. Having only one global language helps in communication and economic growth which also have some drawbacks.

It is obvious that having one language spoken all over the world helps in communication, Their will be no barriers between countries because of language. Everyone can go to any other country and survive their without any problems by communication. Universal language also helps in economic growth which brings traders from different countries together and helps them in devolping their own indivual places. Dealings and exports imports can be done without any communication problem which ultimately leads to development of the country.

However, Firstly having universal language leads to disappear of all the other languages followed by their cultures. Culture in the one beautiful thing that world offers. If their ia a common language all over the world, it leads all the cultures and traditions to disappear. All the countries are unique in their culture which attracts people all over the world. having global language leads to disapperance of all the cultures and traditions. Secondly, their will be drop down in tourism. If all the countries are having same language and same culture, nothing excites people to travel and experience new life. Traveling makes people to get rid of stress and gives pleasant soul. If the countries are having same cultures then no one will be willing to travel which leada to instant dropdown in tourism.

To conclude, Though their are some advantages of having one universal language, their also comes disadvantages which is harmful in more extend.

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Average: 6.8 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67869776066 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476702508961 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3651670908 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344421405994 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127969090433 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112301776426 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233736548779 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153259563227 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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