Do you agree or disagree with this statement: The rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
No one would argue that youth is a tremendously vital period of every individual’s life. It is a step towards either a bright future or disappointing one. Although it is a common belief among some people that regulations expected in whole societies to be pursued by young individuals are too strict, I personally believe otherwise.
First reason to elaborate this statement is the increase in crime rate among youngsters. Despite the existence of all these strict rules, nowadays the world is experiencing an exponential growth in street crimes such as dealing drugs as well as robbery which is often done by young people. This shows that not only social obligations and rules are not strict enough, they have lots of deficiencies.
Secondly, regulations which are expected to be followed in every society, emerge out of the particular demands and conditions in that society. When we realize that every societal norm and its following rules are compatible with the unique features of that community, then the concept of strict rules would become irrelevant. In my adolescence, for instance, my parents ground some harsh limitations and obligations regarding my studies and education, according to excessive growth of population in my generation which had led to shortage of the available places in governmental Universities’ admissions. Therefore, just like those rules on that period of time in my life, other expectations of parents and societies from teenagers are proportional to a particular challenge in that society.
Taken together, I subscribe to the idea that limitations expected from young people to follow are appropriate with their age and conditions in which they are living in, and will bring them prosperity in their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32014388489 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12531971347 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4645353926 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.454545455 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247230080449 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826533056435 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689139756903 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132682477449 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108328590363 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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