Doctors, nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Famous sportspersons and actors are known for their annual earnings, which are in crores. Many believe that doctors, nurses and teachers should be given more salary in comparison to celebrities. I strongly believe that this should happen due to various reasons outlined in this essay.
To begin with, the medical practitioners or tutors are the pillars of our society and country development depends on them. For instance, people are immigrating to developed countries because of their medical and education facilities. If a country provides a handsome salary to its university teachers and ones related to the medical field, brain drain will surely decrease and hence good for the nation.
Moreover, movie stars and sports stars who are famous earn a lot of money from TV commercials. Thus, there is no need to pay more to those who are already earning millions of dollars. Take, for example, cricket players make millions through endorsements and yet our country administration offers them fat salaries. Whereas, young graduates are given only basic salary during the probation period which is a shame.
Lastly, if the same scenario continues nobody will go for a job which cannot provide a good standard of living and status in society. A recent study has concluded that most of the schools and hospitals are working with inadequate staff, as there is a shortage of capable persons to run these institutes.
To sum up, governments should motivate youngsters to take up fields like education and medical care by increasing the salary package of doctors nurses and teachers. Celebrities may be sports or movie stars are already earning a big chunk of money will not mind pay cuts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13768115942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69476571056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.883651191 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111318851108 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380572283504 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622487018721 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581290413877 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505413230667 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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