Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer
Doing enjoyable activities with a child can bring lots of funs, and develop more skills than reading. However, not all activities with kids will have positive outcomes as wished. I do agree with the first opinion even though some rare situations will happen.
If being given a chance to do pleasant activities with a child, most parents would be happy to do that because it would sharpen adults skills better and gain much more than skills. Firstly, doing enjoyable activities with a kid would require parents to comprehend this activity's skills more so that they could explain to their kids in an easier way. Moreover, parents have to be ready to answer kids' all sorts of questions no matter how bizzar and crazy this question could be. For example, when someone is playing basketball with a kid, the kid would be more interested and eager to learn when the adult has fancy moves and accurate shotting skills. Besides, doing a pleasant activity with a kid can be creative than reading because there are more than one approaches to accomplish the activity's goal nicely, compared with the reading, which reading is the main way to finish the book.
However, not all enjoyable activities would be better than reading, considering kids would have different understandings towards enjoyable activities with grown-ups. Some activities are not suitable for kids, if taking the kid to participate in the activity, the kid would have passive attitudes towards the activity. Hence the adult would be difficult to teach them and doing the fun staff would result in dangerous outcome. For example, if an adult would like to take the kid to take the roller coaster, but the kid has the fear of the height. The nice activity of taking the kid to the roller coaster would be filled with the kid's crying and shouting, and no one will enjoy this activity, and not mention developing skills from this activity.
All in all, I do not think having an enjoyable activity with a kid is not helping develop more skills and creativity than reading. but as an adult, knowing the minimum line which a kid would define enjoyable is important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86740331492 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4712195204 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472375690608 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9799955536 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310764302965 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145825437581 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128252220245 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2570506863 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801203695279 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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