Due to the rapid development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some experts believe that the local traders are closing their trade because of the inability to confront with burgeoning of malls which is ultimately suffered by the residents. However, I do not completely agree with this notion. This essay will narrate my thoughts, the other side and a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, the main argument for the decline of local people would be loss of money. Since the price of products in any supermarket includes charges for huge power consumption, the final cost would be soaring. For instance, the wooden bed would cost 25% higher in Reliance mall compared to a conventional carpenter. Such dealing affects the humans badly. In addition, it would create inconvenience for poor community. As these commercial edifices are on the out skirts of the city, it not possible to visit regularly over there. Hence, people might not get house hold items when required.
Conversely, it has also proved to be economical while buying items for such commercial centers. Despite of extra charges on the items, when bulk purchases are made the the cost of items has been heavily reduced on account of exemption from dealer. For example, we get 20% discount on purchasing 10 shirts at a time in D-mart. But, such type of shopping is rarely done by the destitute because of their poor economical condition. They can neither afford to shop daily nor can buy in bulk which puts them into a critical issue of their survival.
In conclusion, although the rich locals can afford the malls, it is a curse to the impoverished locals as they face huge financial loss and face issue in their convenience, if the local shops are closed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94661921708 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62033377866 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.56635564 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107012836726 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291167082337 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460812237587 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762021037954 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056329630491 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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