Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is important than the others?

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Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is important than the others?

In order to get an idea of how any country is faring, economic indicators are one way to find out, while there are some other factors as well, in view of some people. In following few lines, I will be discussing other factors which should be considered in country’s progression as well as their important.

To start with, In lay men’s language economic indicators are among the most accurate measuring criteria of country’s success and progression. For instance, if we look at GDP rate of any country it will provide a fair idea of its income. While if we checkout per capita income of a nation it will give us an image of the buying power of the individuals. One of the prime examples of which is Pakistan’s economic indicators, it shows in and out of our country’s economic situation whether we are progressing economically or not.

On the contrary, there are people with a view that there are several other factors which play enormous role in success and progression of a country. These factors may include, law and order situation, the type of government a country has or its socio-political status. In my view the most important factors is the law and order situation within the country, as if the cities and the citizens of a country are safe then there will be economic activity, foreign investors will be attracted to invest in different sectors. Again I would like to quote example of Pakistan. If we look at the tourism industry, which used to be major contributor in Pakistan’s economy, it declined when there were miscreants in northern parts of the country. But after a sincere and sweeping operation done by Pakistan’s security forces, tourism in 2017-18 has increased by 60% approximately, this turn of events has big time impacted country’s economy positively.

There are numerous such examples where other than economic progress has affected success of a country. If the country is safe then it will prosper by leaps and bounds, as it will provide a better and positive image of the country to the entire world.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my view, on the contrary, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95988538682 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03265587673 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2366215124 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.642857143 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233943327431 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088124767719 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880124123148 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161263577463 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745430608489 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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