Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that universities play an important role in educating society. However, it is always recommendable that the associated cost of education should be sponsored by the authorities. I completely agree with the suggestion.
In this essay I will support my views stating its advantages for the society and their individuals.
Firstly, Looking the advantage that this decision will bring to the society. Universities will equip the society with more doctors, scientists and other important professionals. A country without these professionals is a country not having capability to create, maintain and thus progress. Conversely, if the education is not made free to students then the enrollments in the universities may be less due to high cost of education. Hence, shortage of such important experts will be the consequence.
Besides developing a workforce, another crucial advantage is it helps in broadening the horizons of the residents. With proper education individuals will get more opportunity for employment inside as well outside the country. Moreover, It is proved that education works an effective deterrent for the crime as citizens are getting less influenced by the anti-social elements of the society. For example, as per the last published statistics, cases of honor killing has reduced by 30 percentage in India and the most important factor behind the change is an increase in the literacy rate. In contrast, exorbitant fees of institutes, usually restrict to make the best of the available opportunities of making progress and contributing towards the society.
In conclusion, free education will not only help the society to prosper but also citizens can make the best of the available opportunity in their lives.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease in the literacy rate. In contrast, exorbitant fees of institutes, usually r...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4652014652 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13326661577 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8719409321 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154163395342 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513727012457 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477814310929 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859628922586 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459038562642 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease in the literacy rate. In contrast, exorbitant fees of institutes, usually r...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4652014652 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13326661577 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8719409321 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154163395342 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513727012457 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477814310929 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859628922586 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459038562642 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.