More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day.
Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years the culture of working remotely has risen in popularity over the alternative to exclusively working form the office. While It is of paramount importance that the employees should consider which type of working culture is suitable for them. This essay will explain why I believe this trend has more benefits than drawbacks for the employees and employers.
Firstly, considering the negatives of working remotely, the obvious one is that this way of working acts as the deterrent for employee's health. This is because unlikely offices houses are not usually equipped with the proper infrastructure required for some professionals. For instance, an employee who works on the computer for long hours requires a proper desk and special computer's screen designed to have fewer strains on eyes. Conversely, In case of absence of such facilities less concentration on work because of ill-effects on employee's health is often the consequence. Moreover, another concern for this working environment is that the data is more vulnerable to theft. This is the result of storing more data electronically than physically, which means
it can be stolen by any hacker who infiltrates the website. Although the aforementioned concerns can be mitigated by proper cautiousness and installing the best anti-hacking software.
One of the major advantages of this switch is that it improves employees' efficiency. This is because of the relaxed working environment of the home or a coffee shop is one of the results of the factor in reducing work-related anxieties. It has shown that a relaxed environment ofter acts as a reducing agent for the stress level. Another advantage of this trend is that it provides more flexibility for the resources especially the elderly employees or working parents. For instance, working parents can support their kids during exams and make them comfortable in maintaining the balance among their personal and professional phases of life.
In conclusion, working from home brings boost employees' happiness and efficiency which outweighs the disadvantages of data theft and minor health issues that can be mitigated with proper cautiousness.
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Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43148688047 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02083025519 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5247721367 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264597927551 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864316909948 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556053232348 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138668620436 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713557022672 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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