Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, it is the responsibility of national leaders to state the art medical facilities for the citizens of a country. It is often argued advancements in medical treatment and medical technology have dramatically increased its cost over the last few years and have made it unaffordable for many individuals in society. However, I firmly concur with this notion because it is the primary duty of a nation to take care of its people and provide them free health services.
Multiple factors advocate that free medical treatments should be provided to individuals and have several reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, it would be extremely difficult for a person who is unemployed or old person to afford medical treatments in absence of free health services. Such people do not have a source of income, thus it makes them more susceptible to death in case of illness. Secondly, the government is responsible for the wellness of its citizens. Therefore, they should take necessary actions to improve health by providing them a lofty treatment without charging any single penny.
Thirdly, health care services should be prioritizing. Individuals may have access to consultation and other general services without any restrictions. It is their legitimate right given by the health and care department to avail quality medical treatment free of cost. Yet, some diseases such as cancer and heart-related are more vulnerable and severe. These two diseases demand more attention and care, which makes their treatment more expensive. As a result, there should be some restrictions from the government to provide free medical care and attention to these two dreadful diseases.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that health is the first and foremost of every individual or group of individuals in a society where country leaders should provide free medical treatments and attention, especially to ones who cannot afford the medical expense.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33441558442 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9542582278 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7560269939 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288991836769 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966455446377 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637182298882 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173000079949 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267144692425 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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