Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advances in technology and communication and increased immigration led to the death of several languages. Although this phenomenon might have some consequences for society. I personally believe that it makes our lives far easier and more convenient in much broader ways.
On the one hand, the languages of a nation play an important role in introducing that nation. In some cases, it is considered a property of that nation. Also, it protects the culture, tradition and history of a group of people. When a nation loses a language, it also loses the potential of greater diversity in art, music, literature, oral traditions and custom. So some people believe that the government should try to preserve this diversity which makes society more interesting.
On the other hand, the primary goal of language is to communicate effectively. If there are fewer languages, communication of people from different nations would be much easier and effective. The advances in technology had a tremendous impact on the way we interact with each other. So the disappearance of several languages is inevitable. Languages change because people need better and easier communication way. With fewer languages, there will be no need to learn different kinds of languages, travelling to different parts of the world would be easy. Political and economic negotiations between nations would be much faster and easier. Sometimes extinction of a language is not only destructive but also it is helpful because this would reduce the language and cultural barrier we have in our world and people can share their customs and cultures with common language more easily.
In conclusion, we should not worry too much about language's disappearance and should accept the fact that fewer language in the world means better communication and better understanding among nations.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30716723549 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98405958142 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7026142694 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277076156298 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830142851911 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581596361505 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142328127843 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790425163259 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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