Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In accordance with several studies, approximately six thousand idioms are speaking around the world, however, just a few languages are used for more than one thousand people. As such, some idioms are dying out increasingly. This essay will explain why this fact could be important for humanity.
The idiom is a term concerning the language used for identifying a nation in relation to other societies and it is related to the existence of a political statement. In other words, languages play a vital role in the illustration of a nation either authenticity or history, but I believe that it will not be so important because we have other forms to keep the history of country and I think that over the years with the intention of proceeding with globalization we will prefer facilitating the forms of communication throughout the world.
On the other hand, having fewer idioms all over the world must be better for effective communication. For instance, with the disappearance of some languages that are less widely used, people will try uniformity in communication and it helps for inclusion because it would ease up education, work opportunities, migration, and business deals. In addition, it takes benefits of expanding business at the international level as well as that would enhance the diplomatic relationship.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that if we have fewer languages in the world, we will have an easier and simplifier life because we could facilitate our communication with other foreign persons.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, as well as that, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18699186992 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.123951341 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8451518509 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.777777778 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312855023386 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117537499702 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646043682141 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18212925801 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413181584686 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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