Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, likes smart phones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?
there is no iota of doubt that, people today watches movie and playing games through mobile devices any time any where. this phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to people. However, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to frequent use of mobile devices. The following paragraph's would shed light on the pros and cons of the technology.
To begin with the bright side, using modern technology such as smartphones, tablets and laptop computers has many benefits. First of all, we can save time when watching our favorite movie. For example, when watching move sometimes there is unwanted program like songs, add disturb a lot and ruin our entertainment, we can avoid this program by fast forwarding using these technology.Therfore, we can enjoy as well as save our time. In addition, with the help of this technology people need not to go to cinema halls for watching movie. they can enjoy these movie at home or other premises when they want. Also, children can play any favourite game they want in the home and in front of parents. Hence, parents didn't have to worries about their children.
On the flip side of the coin, there are a handful of nasty consequences as well, Firstly, using these technology a lot can be health hezaderous. this means, it can cause a plethora of diseases. For instance, using computer more hours can cause eye strains. Another drawback of this is that, many people, especially young stars get addicted to it. Young people keep themselves occupied with vedio games and movies most of the times. they do have time for physical activities and this affects their health adversely.
In conclusion, drawbacks of having unrestricted access to entertainment using portable devices far outweighs any of the minor advantages it brings for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07432432432 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7293429449 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.64939522 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193173105191 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528298861963 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415395602567 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113177782975 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165193932132 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.