In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Expenditure of public money needs to be done on the probes to outer space since, it is being anticipated that the human survival on Earth is going to be tough in some next decades. However, this essay discords the notion of spending money on space exploration when Earth can be made a better living place and it would be quite challenging to reside on a planet which is completely unknown to mankind.
To commence with the principle reason of my viewpoint, investment would offer fruitful outcomes if it is done on the prevailing problems of mother earth. Due to this, the prediction of difficult survival can be reversed as solutions to many issues are in hand and just the right amount of efforts and funds are needed. To exemplify the same, most pressing issue of all is pollution, be it of any kind, yet, humans have developed numerous measures to put an end to this menace such as introduction of automobiles which run on renewable sources rather than the use of fossil fuels. Thereby, the efforts on earth would have quick and effective outcomes.
Apart from this, human civilization on planet earth has been from millenniums and migrating to an isolated region with uncertain circumstances is not a practical solution. Even, mankind has developed and adapted this place as their home. This change, probably, would jeopardize the survival owing to the fact that every element there would lead to a question of being apt for living or not. For an instance, ice on Mars has ensured the water provisions but it is still uncertain that for how long it will be able to quench the thirst of humanity. Hence, there are greater chances of monetary loss if this kind of research projects are undertaken.
To reiterate, it can be said that undoubtedly, Earth is witnessing a plethora of issues ,but mankind has gone too far in finding the remedy for almost every situation. Thence, I strongly feel that our planet should be made suitable for survival rather than developing a new planet.
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Message: Did you mean 'residing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: residing
...place and it would be quite challenging to reside on a planet which is completely unknown...
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Suggestion: ,
...Earth is witnessing a plethora of issues ,but mankind has gone too far in finding ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, apart from, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65472118002 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8387073468 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169916056329 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572679103452 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373344609505 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104700860399 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343852361759 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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