Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is reckoned by a group of parents that for the care of children aged 1-4, childcare centres offer impressive services. On contrary, the guardians who are into some jobs prefer their family members especially, the grandparents as more reliable for the same task. Although day-care centres have professional caretakers, I believe the level of security found with family members cannot be replaced by any stranger.
According to the former perspective, childcare centres are preferred by those parents who desire to provide specialized care since the workers of these centres are qualified and trained to do their job. As a result, it is ensured that a child is in an environment which meets the needs of a small baby. This can be illustrated from the instance of England where there is higher demand of day-care centres as parents who work round the clock are relaxed once they leave their child within these centres. However, I feel despite of effective care, a stranger can never take place of a family which is essential in this stage of life.
Nevertheless, the opinion of latter group has strong grounds as the family members have a natural bond with the child because of which love and affection is more that would ultimately lead to a more secure environment. Even, this would promote the family institution and parents will be relieved that the kids are in secure hands. Take an example of Indian families where grandparents are found to be more trustworthy when it comes to the liability of their child. Therefore, I, too, opine that this big responsibility should be given to family persons only.
To reiterate, it is obvious that neither of the sides cannot be negated as childcare centres are known for its tailor-made caring and grandparents have an innate bond with kids. Yet, the latter group will be a safer option as trusting an anonymous person is also tough being parents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60887158318 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 320.0 20.2975951904 1577% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1546.0 106.682146367 1449% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 320.0 20.7667163134 1541% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 7.06120827912 949% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287437010223 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.287437010223 0.084324248473 341% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183363365715 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559933909671 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 161.3 13.0946893788 1232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -253.32 50.2224549098 -504% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.16 8.58950901804 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.0 10.1190380762 1285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 130.0 10.7795591182 1206% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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