Some people claim that children of preschool age should attend childcare centres due to the best services they offer, while parents assume family members will do better in taking care of their children. This essay will state both sides of the argument before my preference is presented.
On the one hand, childcare centres are suitable for preschool-age children due to some benefits below. Firstly, staff working in these facilities are loaded with years of fieldwork and expertise taught logically and scientifically in training institutions. Therefore, they can provide the best selections for certain children promptly and suitably. Secondly, these childcare centres have many smart toys and equipment, allowing children to engage in and use their imagination and recognition to solve puzzles with their peers that can enhance physical and mental strength.
On the other hand, grandparents can become better carers due to several reasons. Firstly, because they might have been retired from their former workplace due to unqualified standards of physical and mental abilities, grandparents have tremendous amounts of spare time. Thus, they can entirely pay more attention to their grandchildren during the day without being distracted by any work-related business. Secondly, as a childcare staff might have to handle more than one kid simultaneously, some kids may not get enough attention. This problem will rarely happen if they are taken care of by their grandparents. This is because grandparents tend to look after a kid.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that although some benefits childcare centres give to preschool-age children, I believe grandparents can offer their grandchildren better cares and attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58620689655 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95833577565 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6046997698 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315373920762 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106037912566 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750006463498 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197813141582 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466761884096 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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