One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution To what extent do you agree or disagree

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scarcity of food has become the most pressing issue across the globe in this contemporary era for which, it is being suggested that this problem can be mitigated by adapting the genetically modified foods. This essay firmly advocates this notion since with the introduction of GM crops, variety in fruits and vegetables have surged that is quite beneficial. Even, these crops are found to produce more quantity in lesser time.
To commence with the principle reason, the research and development into genetically modified foods has bestowed humanity with higher range of eatables. As a result, there are ample of alternative food items when the naturally-grown crops fail to satisfy the hunger or this can also be considered as reduced burden on these crops. For an instance, the bell peppers were introduced which were mutated with the genes of capsicum that has widened the options of vegetable for consumers. Therefore, this cross-breeding method is no less than a blessing.
Besides this, ever-increasing population has grown the concern about shortage of food but with aid of genetic modification, the crops not only grow in abundance but also quicker. This has assisted humanity to feed themselves and even, eliminate the grave issues of starvation and malnutrition. The best example for this would be USA which has higher yield, that is why, it is able to lend a hand to the underdeveloped nations such as Uganda with the provision of food to satisfy their hunger. Thus, higher productivity in less time due to these crops has made it desirable approach.
To reiterate, it can be said that undoubtedly, the genetic engineering of food has revolutionized the ways food is grown as it has led to diversity of food products along with more quantity in minimum time possible, thereby, being highly conducive approach.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, thus, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02013422819 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79380101018 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 298.0 20.2975951904 1468% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1496.0 106.682146367 1402% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 298.0 20.7667163134 1435% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.0 7.06120827912 921% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153052881401 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153052881401 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109562344763 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316297085084 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.2 13.0946893788 1155% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -230.99 50.2224549098 -460% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.5 11.3001002004 1058% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.97 8.58950901804 267% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.2 10.1190380762 1198% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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