Nowadays, It is fundamental that parents provide the pocket cash to their their children, while others think it can cause some negative effects. This essay will discuss both of benefits and drawbacks and I will give my opinion.
On the one hand, I believe that poker money can provide servral benifits to the children. Some parents are too busy to prepare the foods or drinks for children instead of offering money so they can buy it from the shop at school. Besides that it can be an emergency cash for children when there is an unpredictable situation happen. For example, I remember that day, I was lost when I on the way home. luckily, I have coin to call my father immediately so my father is able to find me and pick me up to home safely. Moreover, children can learn how to manage their income when received the pocket money from parents.
On the other hand, some people think that children might to worship on more money because they can purchase what they want, such as toys, sneak and so on. If parent didn’t adjective this behavior, which will cause a overspending habit. They might start to value things by money without moral thinking. Nowadays, there are several cases relative to this circumstance because parent gives much pocket money to their children without teaching them how to use it.
In conclusion, although parents provide the pocket money is beneficial ,but the drawbacks needed considerable.I believe this behaviour is necessary to offer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: their
...that parents provide the pocket cash to their their children, while others think it can cau...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Luckily
...day, I was lost when I on the way home. luckily, I have coin to call my father immediat...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...jective this behavior, which will cause a overspending habit. They might start to...
^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s provide the pocket money is beneficial ,but the drawbacks needed considerable.I ...
^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... ,but the drawbacks needed considerable.I believe this behaviour is necessary to ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47857625877 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.187004246 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2307692308 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15593542488 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581162680321 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415231693946 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978448149149 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268341560715 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.