Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fast and safe transportion station system has been improved for development of nation and it is irrefutable to say that administration should spend money on railways system than roads while roads are always appropriate for individuals. To my mind both are important for developing of the country ,but I give more preference to improvement of railway system.
The farmers factor to note is that railway system help to travel one place to another at very low cost , it provide food service, and also done their way with comfront zone. Moreover there is a less Environment Degradation using railways when people use roads ,there is a high wastage of fuels and also it leads to pollution due to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence government should keep an eye on improvement of railway system.
Apart from this ,if the people travel by road, it will create a problem of road accident and people will lose their life. Additionally ,rails are much more safe and scuare.Besides this , rail system is time consuming mode as on the road there is a number of traffic and mostly people stuck in traffic conjuction .Therefore, government should spend money on the railways system.
However, there is another school of thought according to which roads are essential for masses because roads are attached with village or small town that benificial to reach their destination . so roads are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims construct the roads then it construct with the nominal charges but create a railway line has more exhorbitant so government ought to improve the road system
To conclude, I would restricted that railways are the less expensive and emmit less pollution. However roads are also good to reach their destination .Henceforthly, government should expend more funds on railway but also pay attention on roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82424136212 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6267536238 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149116751999 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704763786573 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544337450316 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940286727227 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348590790177 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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