The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a drastic increase in the percentage of shoppers purchasing online. Some argue that sooner or later it will be the cause for closure of offline stores, I do not completely agree with this statement. This essay will discuss how diverse shopping preferences aid the stores to sustain and also outline the possible reasons for ecommerce to capture other markets.
There is ample evidence that online shopping is the way forward. The central reason for this is two fold, primarily, competitive prices. The attractive prices offered by the e-tailers are hard to compete leading to decrease in footfalls. Secondly, convenience. It eliminates the planning and hassle of going to a physical store to purchase a product. With just a click of button from the living room, with varied options, a product can be purchased and get it delivered on time. To illustrate this, a survey conducted by the ITO indicates that 70% of the respondents said they buy stuff online because of the countless options to select from a single place. Therefore it is conclusively clear that the clear advantages of online shopping over retail stores could lead to new shopping era.
Although there is a case for electronic shopping being convenient at discounted prices, the experience of purchasing from a physical outlet cannot be understated. The dissimilarity among shoppers is a primary reason for existence of many businesses. Despite the choice to purchase it from web, many buyers want to touch and feel the item before making a decision. In addition to this, window shopping and impulse buying pattern are the revenue drivers of offline stores which are not effected by changing trend. For instance, a wife of an IT employee insisted that she wants to visit a furniture showroom instead of buying a couch online as she would like to check the material used for the making. Thus it is possible to state that there are instances where people would prefer getting a product or item from a marketplace ensuring that physical shopping doesn’t become a thing of past.
In conclusion, irrespective of the increasing people migrating towards internet to shop, I believe that shops will not go obsolete as the different preference of buyers will keep them both relevant in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03723404255 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74729279479 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9232744653 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.411764706 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188031224942 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549121233269 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062960004862 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12516191849 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321903093733 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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