The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Shopping has been a part and parcel of human life since ages. However, the trend of shopping has moved from offline to online in the past few years. This essay will explore arguments to state that shops and stores in cities hold its position firm in terms of customer benefit and will not shut even after the growth of online shopping at a noticeable factor.

Undeniably, shopping subsists customers of every age group. Online shopping is most successful among young people who are technology friendly. Remaining people still find it hassle free to go outside and shop. An old woman in my society, for instance, daily visits the vegetable shop as she is unaware of online shopping. Additionally, online shopping is a time consuming process in contrast to offline shopping. While buying from stores or shops one can save the time of traversing the product online and ordering and waiting for product to be received. A recent news featured a man who ordered a refrigerator online and received it after two months along with an apology letter from the company.

Another positive feature that warrants favoring offline shopping is the satisfaction aspect. Human beings have a tendency to believe on what they see. People have more trust on offline shopping due to the fact that they can see the stuff in actual while choosing it. Not only satisfaction is the reason, but also meeting urgent needs is. Usually online shopping is not preferable because it takes a great deal of time and fails to meet the urgency of the requirement. For instance, if a person is ill, he would would like to go to chemist for medicine instantly instead of ordering it online that might take longer time.

By and large, with the above salient reasons, it seems impossible that shops will be closed in near future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in contrast, by and large, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48349216494 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8282645547 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1176470588 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306343139291 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974357124117 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626150200834 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191760120038 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06878273815 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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