he development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one lang

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he development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

The overwhelming inflow of tourists has witnessed by manifold nations, for the few decades. By the virtue of this, English has become the most widely spoken language. Some societies advocate that one day English will predominate over all other languages and result in their eventual disappearance. Although there are many benefits to using English as a global language, it has some drawbacks.
To embark with the pivotal rationale behind the topic at hand is globalization. Owing to this, our world has become one large entwined network of trade and communication channels. As a result, the movements of the people between countries and interaction between societies have escalated dramatically. Therefore, masses prefer to speak English as a common language in order to make their travelling effortless and exciting. One evident benefit to having one international language is that it would diminish the communication barrier. This would lead to a vigorous relationship between the nations. Consequently, worldwide trades would flourish, which in turn would establish a healthier world economic growth.
Moving forth, this trend would erect certain detrimental effects on other languages and their cultures. Cultural diversity would depreciate gradually if people would speak one language. As a consequence, tourism would plunge because there would be no reason to travel for pleasure and interest if all countries will have the same languages and culture. This would devastate many countries economically that utterly rely on tourism for their income. However, one universal language would engender better understanding between not only the countries but all people throughout the world. This would lead to the availability of multiple jobs and educational opportunities at a global scale with a wide variety of fields or options to choose from hence facilitating individual growth and enabling people to strive for excellence.
In my perspective, one multinational language would create negative impacts on cultural heritage by shrinking its prominence. However, this will accelerate not only the strong bonding between discrete nations but also ender significant employment facilities on a global scale.
In essence, although there are some negative sides to having a single global language, it brings many benefits such as the growth of the international economy and employment.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63888888889 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01549496377 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0037498242 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258691005676 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836214311268 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651042185516 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140368786006 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783663306327 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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