A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
To stay healthy is becoming an extremely intricate task. The fast food culture is becoming a threat for many people; hence, staying health will prevent us from dangerous diseases. Most important activities such as continuous diet, structured exercise routines and mind should be refreshed periodically, could help us to stay healthy in our life.
Firstly, fast food culture is slowly invading into our food pattern, which is considered to be great threat. The preservatives used in these quickly heated foods contain animal fats, which causes illness such as obesity and cancer. For instance, the report published by Oxford university states that people who are eating outside foods are prone to diabetes. Additionally, the oil used to prepare ready made foods enables to deposit bad fat in our body and causes heart attacks among many.
Secondly, periodic exercise would help us to be healthy. Some people argue that they do intense exercise but could able to reduce the weight. Hence, a consultation with fitness trainer in order to train all our part equally would aid to stay healthy.
Finally, some people tend to relax their brain due to continuous work. For example, an article published yesterday states that people who take breaks to reduce mental stress are providing quality work in their organizations. Further more, spending more time in taking part in games could reduce the accumulated stress in our body. Hence, reducing mental stress is important to stay healthy.
In conclusion, to stay health is a paramount ask for several people. Knowing more about the food we eat and proper exercise to burn the food we consume is vital to stay healthy in our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ital to stay healthy in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16727272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5367748119 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2879834738 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119822097297 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427073221956 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325427158759 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690915500826 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03627260794 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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