If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this.
When marketing and sales of a product is continual, even booming, it is thought that the necessity of advertisement is pointless and can be perceived as a sort of entertainment. However, in my opinion, advertisement has a significant role in business by securing the existing customers and ensuring trust and brand value of the product or the company involved.
While some products are bought and sold at a continual rate for some time, there is a high risk of losing customers because of the high competition in the market. Recent studies show that many companies lose existing customers, thus incurring huge loss for them. Even the products which enjoy monopoly with few or no competition, faces the same consequences because of the huge abundance of products in the market. Advertisements ensure trust and brand value of the existing product thus securing its place in the market. For instance Pepsi was dominating the market for many years until other soft-drink products such as Coca-Cola took a large share of its market.
In addition, the smart-phone industry has ever-changing upgrades every week, thus launching new products every month which, spread by advertisements becomes very informative for the consumers. Advertisements also spread information about similar type of products, thus helping the society and the consumers aware of the best available products in the market and their new features. For instance, the Samsung mobile phones recently launched dual-camera smartphones in competition to the Vivo smartphones at lower cost, thus spreading the relevant information to the buyers.
To conclude, advertisements plays a pivotal role in securing its customers, continual sales of product apart from spreading necessary information to the buyers. While it may seem to be a form of entertainment to some people, however, it has wider implications towards the society and business.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40604026846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09811335858 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4899801392 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161564204679 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06577716598 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481494725663 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106696871734 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379107076056 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.