More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is it? Is it good or bad?

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More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is it? Is it good or bad?

Movies have become a popular source of entertainment and business in recent years. Substantial time and money is spent each month by individuals generating huge revenue from it. But, although movies have significant role in our cultural and economic growth, it is deleterious at an individual level especially for children and adults alike who spend their free time watching movies, and TV series endlessly. We will delve into the positives and negatives of this emerging cultural trend now.
Internet has revolutionized the availability of various entertainment –movies, TV series, comedy shows, spiritual, devotional and educational videos like tutorials on any literary subjects are ubiquitous, making then easily available to the mass at low costs. However, they consume a greater part of our free time making us feel happy, knowledgeable and aware with trending movies but leaves meagre time for our personal growth. Movies are so addicting that people spend hours in front of them unconsciously, thus affecting their health and family life as well. People not only end up squandering their free time but also their money.
Recent studies suggest that people on average people spend 4 hours on entertainment in daily basis while travelling, eating and before sleeping which adds up to 120 hours or 5 days monthly. A constant source of entertainment makes us dependent on it, leaving no space for our personal creativity, family or friends A generation suffering in obesity due to poor lifestyle habits has crept up.
To sum up, people watching movies during their free time is a harmful trend for our culture and well-being, which could wisely be used for learning other vital skills for our personal growth and development.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28158844765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85307752253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671480144404 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5993398791 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241900234902 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925499992478 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859337802951 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14699323966 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571203766951 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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