More and more people nowadays are buying tickets for sports and cultural events. Is it good or bad? Give your opinion?
The wider popularity of sports and cultural events is directly proportional to the purchasing power of an individual, and nowadays every person on earth sets up a separate budget for spending on various cultural events as well as sports activities because of their good in hand incomes. It is argued that people are increasingly buying tickets for sports and cultural events which I believe is praiseworthy in relation to both fitness a well as community grounds. The following paragraphs will discuss how it is beneficial for any country?
To embark with Undoubtedly sports play a very significant role in everybody's life. Although it involves two opponents playing against each other, it also gives way to the crowd coming together to cheer for the player representing their nation and this also boosts his/her morale to perform well. A recent study from the international Olympics authority found that the success of any player has a direct connection with the support of his audience and their cheerful support.
Cultural events, on the other hand, brings the community together that involves celebrations of various traditions of a particular economy, moreover, it inculcates good ethics in any individual's life. Furthermore, such events are organized to educate people about a particular country's festivals and religious beliefs. For instance, India celebrates the festival of Diwali in October and it is followed by 10 days of cultural events and programmes to educate people of the Indian community about its history and why it is being celebrated.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that both sports and cultural events have their own separate roles to play and both involve the integration of people for their nation. Sports give a lot of leisure and happening atmosphere whereas cultural events provide sense of togetherness among people towards their beliefs. In my opinion, I believe this thinking of people is commendable and is also beneficial for any nation on socio-economic grounds.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28881987578 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.894576542 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1836173964 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.916666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242193845454 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881425520568 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573575717101 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144148301042 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716331201566 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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