The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no second thought that mobile phones have drastically changed our lives which we use to live a few decades ago; whether it is in terms of doing our business differently or the way we communicate. It is one of the boons of all human inventions. However, as every coin has its two ends; I firmly believe that it has also brought more complications in human lives.
To begin with, nowadays mobile phones are readily available in the market at a very economic price which makes them handy and available to youngsters. There are plenty of applications and video games that are just one click away on cell phones. People like to spend a lot of time playing or studying on mobiles which make them more isolated and reserved towards society. They hardly interact outside to make real friends. Moreover, making virtual friends online is in more trend in present with juveniles. For example, this trend is also a cause of the increase in cybercrimes. Many fake people are available online to make fool others financially or emotionally.
Secondly, mobile phones have raised medical complications in people of almost every age group, especially youngsters. The complications of eyes, postures and sleeplessness are very common among all. The reason behind these problems is people are spending less time in outdoor activities and more time indoors using TV, mobiles and laptops. Additionally, no exercise or movement of the body makes people immobile to live a healthy lifestyle. For instance, patients of the young age group are more seen in hospitals nowadays.
To conclude, advancement in technology has always benefited to live an improved Lifestyle. However, it has always brought some disadvantages with it. Here, mobile phones can be useful if we use them smartly and shortly, although we cannot ignore their major problems such as medical complications and social distancing or isolated society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...adily available in the market at a very economic price which makes them handy and availa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80033392099 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8021936094 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232816765151 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572152375894 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751298564927 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143099203718 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443087414266 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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