The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Over the decades, the usability of mobile phones has drastically raised and which leads to improved lifestyles, work and way of communication whereas it also has adverse effects on people health as well as society. But, I believe with mobile phones where long distances have been eliminated also their excess use result into people health and society.
with the advance technology mobile phones communication have completely changed people lives. Firstly, mobile has become a important part of our life. with latest technology phones various task can be performed at same time. For example, with the help of fitness application people can maintain health record such as how may steps they done, track their meal plans and how much water intake have in a day and so on. Also, phones used for adding reminders, alarms, for calculations, listening music tracks, checking mails and many more. Moreover, mobile phones inventions have reduced made longer distance into shorter as well as they are portable and easy to use. People can communicate with their family, friends and relatives in any part of the world also, can see other while making calls. For example, with number of video calling applications people can have live calling with their love one even though, nowadays employer can conduct online interviews as well as with video conference calling is good source of connecting with different part of world and it leads to business expansions.
On the contrast, mobile phones have negatively impact on people health and society. Firstly, mobile phones emit number of radiations that can cause serious health issues to people. For example, as per the researchers if person uses mobile more than an hour a day for over ten years have a higher rate of getting brain cancer also other health issues such as headaches, insomnia, heart problems and many more. Furthermore, with excess usage of mobile phones it also effecting society. People grounded themselves with their mobile phone at one place and as a result, they don’t mingle with their friends and relatives. They are more socially active on their mobiles than in real world.
In conclusion, I believe that mobile phones play an important role in our day to day routine moreover, it reduces long distance with just one phone call but, also excess of everything is worse and can influence many people health and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: With
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Suggestion: With
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...as become a important part of our life. with latest technology phones various task can be p...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...ealth record such as how may steps they done, track their meal plans and how much wa...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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...duced made longer distance into shorter as well as they are portable and easy to u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12276214834 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48647547585 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0599759399 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.823529412 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209560724453 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950518168512 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375148635658 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152714135298 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308555353424 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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