The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The internet has paved the way for disseminating and gaining the innate data in a different way; however there are several challenges associated with the modern technique of acquiring information. This essay shall elucidate severe issues and plausible outcomes to fix the threatning problems.
The fundamental trouble is the unauthenticated material available online because of enormous ways of spreading false information. Some people have vicious intention and upload incorrect details of a particular topic, which might cause repercussions for individuals who unknowingly follow the wrong data. Additionally, few individuals could equip the internet with menacing contents, which might render deleterious effects on the mental health of humans. For instance, terrorists with access to the online platform could demonstrate disturbing videos, which could petrify the public and adversely impact their mental health.
Implementation of crucial steps such as profound inspection and omitting perilous data to prevent these challenges is vital to save the planet and its people. Regimes must take strict actions to control the easy sharing of any material online by limiting and investigating the uploaded information. Furthermore, governments ought to impel citizens to be responsible in providing factual data and reporting the available false content. Thus, deleting dangerous data from the virtual database could be done effortlessly, which would make such a media safer and reliable. To illustrate, social media websites request individuals to report suspicious pages and their posts, which aids the organizations to block such channels to obstruct any mishappening.
In conclusion, the internet has indeed changed the methods a person possesses indispensable data and send it to others, but there are several troubles and possible solutions connected with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86446886447 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0563721511 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5068217956 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874452057078 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03174579466 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446184965306 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655091171884 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388093037672 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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