In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, internet is creating a significant importance in the society. From last few decades, usage of internet has become one of the pressing issue, requires immediate attention. In this topic, will discuss about the advantages of internet and what points are leading these advantages into disadvantage.
In one hand, it is reasonable to say, due to modernization of society, every individual is vitally dependent on internet. Although, myriad of benefits are involved in usage of internet, still people started misusing it. However, It is one of the fastest news spreading platform, sometimes manifolds of false news or rumors are spreading through this medium.
One the other hand, nevertheless, internet has made our lives very easy in numerous ways. while sitting at home we can do shopping, banking, paying bills, recharging utility bills etc. In addition, people can do online meetings, work from home and manifolds of office tasks. It also helps to book doctors appointment, can read latest books on internet.
In my opinion, along with numbers of benefits it is ok if you get some drawbacks. Internet is a very good platform for everything, however, it just requires some alertness. Furthermore, every individual should be alert while providing personal information on internet. Specially when it comes to using banking services. Government body ought to pass laws regarding internet crime. Government should run some awareness programs regarding web crimes.
In the conclusion, i firmly belief, internet brought significant comfort in our life’s along with troubles. However, with the help of government and each individual, we can ameliorate the situation before it becomes more intractable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42677824268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91571264182 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669456066946 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1785697089 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208267081287 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606001897817 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337492627161 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114742346583 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375545564593 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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