It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talent, for instances for sports and music, and others are not. However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to be good sportsperson or musician .
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
As per universal adage ‘nothing is impossible’ similarly when one stands for his/her wit , acumen and self-determination. As per many content that athletes and musicians are born innate; however, other discord. Nevertheless, it is unquestionable that people are born with gifted talent and there are folks who with their insight and motivation can excel the same way as other sports men and musicians.
People show signs of inherited capabilities when they are young and those shows profound interest with great enthusiasm. It is evidently seen when children acquire to learn new skills they show a lot of cognitive power toward the sport or play; however, this does not apply to all. Having said that, there are children who show total excitement at the tender age despite they do not practice much. In addition, their craze and love towards sport and music increases and they stand out different from the rest. Just as , ‘Sachin Tendulkar’ famous cricketer had the will as well as had this skill towards game which made him turned out to be successful player throughout his life and it was his love and dedication towards ‘Cricket’.
Having talked about the innate capabilities there are many factors which when inculcated can bring innumerable sportsmen and musicians around the world. Firstly, it is imperative for the parents to understand the insight of the children and once the epitome is identified, then the younglings have the opportunity to brighten their future in the desired field. Secondly, government should also help infrastructure for the public so the ones from the impoverished villages can also show their talent. In the yesteryear Japan had built various recreational centres for the human well-being and now you can see the Japan had won 12 gold medals in the Olympic Games. Lastly, it is also the utmost obligation of the person to show full passion towards the game of war and towards the music.
Having manifested all the points, I inundate there are folks who innate their abilities and turns out to be splendid musicians and athletes; however, if I believe all humans have the capabilities to perform if provided infrastructure and proper guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22128851541 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01424421282 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585434173669 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0790696538 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163208051726 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557618584957 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410595668195 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103432864218 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488988547052 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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