It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The world is full of talented people. While some have inborn skills, others have acquired it through sheer learning. This essay will discuss why innate talent is of immense value in individuals but why consistent practice and learning could impart the skills as well as make anyone successful.
It is true that there are some people who have an inborn talent which leads to various accomplishments quite early in their lives and sometimes makes them the prodigies that the world has never seen. Moreover, such talented people become the source of inspiration for many others who wants to achieve higher goals. Consider, Mozart, an impeccable musician. Although his music released in the late 18th century, it is still loved and taught in many prestigious music schools. Provided that, despite having natural talent constant honing of skills is substantially vital. For instance, a sportsperson has to prepare his mind and body, irrespective of natural instinct and talent for the game. Sachin Tendulkar, a great Indian batsman, started playing in his teenage because of gifted skills but in order to have a long and successful career he had to learn the proper techniques to up his game.
However, not everyone is as lucky as the aforementioned examples. In spite of this, there are plenty of skillful and talented people all around the world. These are strong-willed individuals who learn to become the best in their respective areas. For instance, Bill Gates, the founder, and creator of Microsoft windows, which is used in nearly every computer system, was not a programmer prodigy. He learned from his failed experience and made improvements many times before launching the final version of the software. Therefore, with constant practice and patience, a skill can be learned which can do wonders for people.
In conclusion, although people with inborn talent achieve enormous success, there are only a handful of such examples. However, most of the people around the world have learned skills and accomplished laurels for themselves. In my opinion, people can become proficient if they strive hard to learn and can achieve in any area whether it is sports or music.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18361581921 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68208698646 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1431817908 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5789473684 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196786781123 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583962477617 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512920489943 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121415136085 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562063198153 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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