It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of globalization, technology has been playing a major role in transforming lives of billions of people. At the same time, many communities across the world are in a fear of losing their culture with the rise of the technology. I completely disagree with the statement.
First of all, I believe that even though the technology and the culture are interlinked to each other, the former one has little sway in influencing the civilizational attributes because the traditions and values have been integral and inseparable part of human lives over thousands of years. Generally, humans by nature have a tendency to preserve anything that is old and valuable. For example, in India, there are hundreds of different cultures and even after rapid industrialization and scientific development over the last century, most of the ancient tribes and communities are still thriving and embracing their roots.
Secondly, technology helps in preserving the culture. In fact, many ancient societies went extinct because of the inability to preserve their way of life in some form or the other. Without development in the knowledge, it wouldn’t be possible to save the ethos in the long run. For example, if we look at the two oldest surviving civilizations like the Indian and the Chinese, their entire history and culture are preserved and protected in the form architecture, books and art. So, in my opinion, there is no need to vilify the technological achievements that humanity has made.
To conclude, traditional cultures and technology should go hand in hand, we can’t resist the later in the fear of losing tradition.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07795015309 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1610068007 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138575699544 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467803212318 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287216979587 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826006487331 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179042005269 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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