It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Courses taught in the academic institutions have always been subject to discussion. It is believed by a school of thought that schools have limited their focus more on formal studies rather than covering other aspects like personal and professional life challenges. I believe schools should be covering both the aspects.
It is agreed by everyone that formal studies are essential. School curriculum is defined to make sure that students are able to increase their level of education in steps. Schools provide foundation for children to build their life ahead when they grow older. Basic subjects like Maths, science, and linguistic courses help students to deversify their knowledge and thinking. However, it is the matter of debate that what portion of formal education is necessary for students in their school life.
We can not deny the importance of personality building for kids. It is argued that lesser portion of school time is reserved to foucs on character building of children. Although, it has been seen that increased attention is paid for extra curricular activities now a days, it is thought that this time and attention could be further increased. I am an advocate of this ideology because students of current times could get information and knowledge from a lot of sources that includes TV, smartphone, youtube etc. Schools should rather focus more on aligning the knowledge with practical skills that are required for living a successful life.
Concluding the above discussion, I would say that there is no deniel with the importance of formal education. However, it is the need of time to increase focus and time for providing practical education along with the routine education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...is paid for extra curricular activities now a days, it is thought that this time and atten...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...aid for extra curricular activities now a days, it is thought that this time and atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22545454545 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70865402212 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5714920634 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 7.06120827912 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168149094201 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059367478534 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363493329032 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096741335859 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262552497439 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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