It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Most of them think that some are gifted skills and talents by genes, especially when it comes to sports or music. However, if children are trained from a tender age, thereby acheive proficiency in the chosen fields. Both the views are true, but in my opinion, skills are nurtured by guiding them in the right direction.
On the one hand, medically there are proven facts that some are talents by the DNA or the IQ levels which directly come from their ancestors. For example, a popular music composer, A.R.Rahman, who is a winner of double Oscars, grammy awards, also nationally and internationally recognized artist, is from a musical background family, where his dad was a keyboard player and is associated with yesteryear composers of Indian cinema. Furthermore, at younger age, one witnesses their family members perform and the applause they receive. Therefore, they are overwhelmed, and inclined to achieve limelight someday. Moreover, the exposure these celebrity kids are influential at an early age, is an advantage and taste the success of life.
On the other hand, a fresh generation of talents emerge out with a proper guidance and mentoring, while their elders suffered poverty and no time and money to showcase their talents burying their dreams. In addition, being desperate to achieve a goal, along with, hardwork, practice tirelessly is the formula to master the field. To illustrate, M.S.Dhoni, the captain of the Indian cricket team who known for his coolness in any situation during the game is a proof, for not being a born talent as none of his family or friends were in this field of sport.
In conclusion, even though, few of them are born talented, they need to be groomed by appropriate guide to achieve the success. Practice makes a man perfect, thus anybody who has a pavement for the right path with right teachers can reach heights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Rahman
... example, a popular music composer, A.R.Rahman, who is a winner of double Oscars, gram...
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Suggestion: Dhoni
...to master the field. To illustrate, M.S.Dhoni, the captain of the Indian cricket team...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a known'.
Suggestion: who is a known
... the captain of the Indian cricket team who known for his coolness in any situation durin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66959282256 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63141025641 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1264689323 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157128611683 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457295517435 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460200793223 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089465006303 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301946586097 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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