You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I attended a market share meeting at your office conference on the 29th December 2011. Unfortunately, missed some confidential documents at the office.
The important papers were left at the reception desk, while I was busy inquiring about the return cab to the airport, as I was already running late to catch the flight.
The file folder consists of company confidential private notes, which is sealed and difficult to access and also has the office logo on it. However, there is another meeting scheduled in the coming month on 30th January 2012, I will need them to present to my personal manages with the minutes in a couple of days. Hence, I will need them back at the earliest.
On saying that, I request you to please pick them up from your staff at the reception and courier it to me, using a reliable postal service. I am thankful for your timely help. Looking forward to receive the documents and will meet you at my next visit.
Yours faithfully,
Lok
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...l for your timely help. Looking forward to receive the documents and will meet you at my n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73563218391 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52936904293 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1384041913 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217691787714 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729160469675 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576597858795 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115962403532 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658045767199 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.