Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Choosing friends who often have similar thoughts is considered a great option by a few. However some others think that critics can also make a good companion. In my opinion, a combination of both is essential for a better living.
On one hand, understanding between people is the key to have a healthy friendship to enjoy peacefulness on each others presence. A friend who has a opinion for everything will always earn hatred that accepting it an idea for betterment, hence we celebrate a companion who is like-minded. Judging a person is the biggest negative influence today, in this case, there is no fear at all rather there is a beautiful relationship bloom between them. These kind of people also can make a better business partner as well. For example, two countries whose rulers can think alike, can become allies and can establish peace rather than developing hatred and call for a war against each other.
On the other hand, difference in opinion is a hindrance in developing a mutual bond between people, criticism helps a healthy debating and helps arriving at a better conclusion. Moreover, friends are the ones who understand our full potential and push us achieve the desired goal. although, there exists some bitterness in getting along with such people, the result out of it is always fruitful.
In conclusion, we should have a mix of friends who are like-minded and criticizers, who promote self development and keep us motivated. At the end of the day, we all need a trustworthy friend more than anything else. Finally, A friend in need is a friend indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89925373134 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82523554632 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1433531716 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314235601766 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100553313278 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479419486605 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189336424689 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489259892228 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.