Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Indubitably, life has become painless with the advent of technological devices like dishwashers, computers, and mobile phones. It is often argued that the invention of such devices made individuals' life painstaking. However, I think that modern technology has reduced stress among people. The following essay will discuss both reasons of life easier and tough while using electronic devices.
The labor-saving devices have made people's life effortless in their daily tasks and have several reasons to substantiate. First and foremost, using these devices in daily lives has been convenient and comfortable for the laborers. To illustrate, before the dishwasher invention, individuals at home used to wash dishes with the help of hands which requires more energy. Nowadays, most of them use dishwashers to clean utensils which is painless work. Secondly, the machines used in factories for making goods and products which were earlier created by workers. Due to this invention, the productivity of work has increased in the factory. Consequently, the financial growth of the company has inclined with the help of labor-saving devices.
Thirdly, technological innovations have contributed to growth in the field of communication using the internet, smartphones, and computers. Because of the internet and electronic gadgets like mobile phones, humans can communicate and send instant messages to their loved ones anywhere across the globe. Therefore, these certain innovations have reduced stress for the people living in the modern world. Conversely, some of the users like elder people find it tough and complex to use technological devices. Because of this, they put more focus and pressure while using such devices as laptops, smartphones, and washing machines. As a result, it increases stress for the aged ones because they think that their using them is a difficult and painful effort.
To conclude, the advent of new technological devices has made lives easier for individuals. Yet, there are some users like old people who find electronic devices complex, which results to increase stress in people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, i think, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53230769231 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89574918002 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.989459225 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279725252094 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845133638923 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488571154329 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17600248308 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284561212959 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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