Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.What problems does this cause?What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
People get influenced by the products which are promoted by the giant companies. Although wealthy businessmen are earning well through this way, people who are running the business of local items are facing a decline in their income. This essay depicts the problems caused by promoted products on the society and numerous ways to motivate people to purchase local products.
Firstly, if more and more people purchase the advertised products then it would be difficult for the local shopkeepers to arrange bread and butter for their family. Thus, it will widen the gap between rich and poor people which will directly affect the economy of that nation. Moreover, people are becoming habituated with the unnecessary shopping because of the marketing strategies of the multi-national companies. These companies are using all the types of communication to influence the tendency of the consumer to purchase the product which they might not need. This could lower the financial position of the citizen. For example, owing to the advertisements for a big sale, a person can purchase a smartphone, even though he owns the cell phones.
However, some measures are required to lower these cynical implications. Government should run awareness programs through which they will tell the benefits of local products to the public. Furthermore, government should allocate some places where local people can sell their items. For instance, London is a prime city where people know the benefit of local products due to the program named “Health and Society” and this program is running by the eminent Non-governmental organization of London.
In conclusion, people get attracted towards the products only by its marketing, they even don’t think of its consequences. Also, if people will not buy local products, then it will increase the poverty of that nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll increase the poverty of that nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35034013605 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8509347033 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8626969252 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307324995909 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993787705572 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628297518273 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187579124304 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564408774164 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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