Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does it cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
The is no denying that advertisements are crucial to get your product out in the market in the eye of common folks. But, big corporations spend huge amount of money in advertisements and as a result they overshadow the smaller local businesses. In my essay, I will explain why and how this is a concerning issue and put forward views on how to deal with it in more practical and organized manner.
To begin with, ad campaigns are way for anyone to show case their product or services to consumer. Global organizations promote themselves by constant bombardment of ads from all the medium of communication using various strategies. As a result this cause a systematic brain washing of the buyer to go for their product specifically as it have been ingrained in them by multiple viewings and sales increase for a particular item. On the contrary, this seriously dampens the small local businesses as they do not have marketing budget to compete with such large companies. This leads to livelihood destruction of many shop owners as their sales will reduce.
To resolve such grim problem, one of the ways is too put a restriction on number of advertisements that a product can have. Secondly, a marketing directive should be formed which will do promotion for small businesses in fair reasonable price and help them design promotion for their products so that they get way to showcase their services without costing much on their pockets. In addition to that tax reforms should be considerate and be waved off to a certain extent for small business for marketing themselves.
In conclusion, although the problem exist for adverts because of multi national companies, it can be handled gracefully if government and other social bodies take active and constant step to implement and keep in check the solutions mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to put'?
Suggestion: to put
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98692810458 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90208590674 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4648030165 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241290552788 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812980285067 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525020522812 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127578422082 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695917222304 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.