In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Over 2 decades, technology has begot seismic shift around the globe. Growing technology influence can be seen while exchanging emails over internet and connecting with world through portals. Despite this, it is agreed that such developments have given birth to various cybercrimes like system hacking and internet scams. I strongly agree with the notion that in near foreseeable future detrimental effects of Information Technology will be greater than positive effects. This essay will demonstrate negative effects to prove this hypothesis.
Firstly, Information Technology is intuitively perceived as great achievement in human history. However, World Wide Web has enlightened numerous cyber crimes where personal identity of user is hacked and being misused to earn illegitimate income. Nowadays, Dubai Islamic Bank of Pakistan is in headlines where bank has to bear loss of 4 Billion Dollars because cyber criminals hacked the customers’ data from online portals; printed faked debit cards encrypted with stole information and then use these cards overseas. Seen in this light, it is agreed that negative consequences of Information Technology are greater than positive achievement.
Another most detrimental effect of Information Technology that must not be neglected is lack of controls which means authenticity of information is dubious. One recent example of internet scam is Dolphin game, where invitation for game was sent to people through email and people exchange pictures with mobile application. This game captured public attention when 180 people committed suicide while playing this death game over internet. Seen in this light, unrestricted rights provided by World Wide Web has become even fatal to lives of mankind.
To conclude, Information Technology has changed the quality of life for people. Traditional modes of communications have almost wiped out but these advancement are threat to privacy. In view of above stated consequences, I strongly agree that demerits of Information Technology outweigh the merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
...ommunications have almost wiped out but these advancement are threat to privacy. In view of above...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmation Technology outweigh the merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72786885246 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93210091951 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63606557377 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9985351339 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263626755295 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805750428402 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405456694717 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150696870722 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323079817661 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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