LEVEL OF YOUTH CRIME ARE INCREASING RAPIDLY IN MOST CITIES AROUND THE WORLD
WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS AND SUGGEST COME SOLUTIONS.
Nowadays, crimes committed by young age have become a debatable topic globally, bringing
many concern between government and society. However, growing numbers have demonstrated
the relevancy of this issue. This essay will point out the reasons why the new generation
are involved in this situation and provide some solutions.
Firstly, the main reason is the freedom that children are growing up.In addition,
modern society allows young people to have more flexibility and freedom. For instance, while
parents are working professional, their children are being carried by other people such as
nannies or other relatives, who in general neglected attention or have a different way to educate them.
However, young people particularly teenagers are becoming far more independent to commit some
crimes that they are not aware of it. Furthermore, a good solution to go away from this issue
could be more presence of a parent in children's daily life and also more discipline in their
activities.
Secondly,the reason for these crimes are augmenting due to early age is easy access to information.
Media often have been showing videos, films and news explaining how people strategically performed
in some kind of crimes such as violence and robbery. Furthermore, it is encouraged by some groups
on social media rapidly. Reduce this to children for this is to reinforce the limit of children
and teenagers on TV, internet and any technical things.
Ergo, freedom and social media are the main factors for a problem with augmenting rates of crime in early
ages. However, parents and teachers are need to take serious actions against this issue, that should
be more present, monitor the time and content available for their child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01374570447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59615568227 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.398912464 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0560009865654 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218051980671 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182030483659 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0181412479626 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162300388194 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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