USING A COMPUTER EVERYDAY CAN HAVE MORE NEGATIVE EFFECTS THAN POSITIVE ON
YOUNG CHILDRREN?
DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE
Nowadays, young children use computers so frequently that some even use
them more than 10 hours every day. Although, some people believe that
there is no harmful effects on young children, I agree that the disadvantages
of it outweight the advantages.
To begin with, the benefits of using a computer are widely admitted. As high
tech tools, computers provide children with verious methods to help them
learn efficiently.Animated web pages and incentive applications are designed
for teaching and inspiring them to access more information and that process
expands their view as a result. Also, children are attracted easily by the
interaction in education computer programs, so that they get knowledge
effectively in a lively atmosphere, and it proves to be welcomed by both
parents and teachers.
On the other hand, negative impacts of using a computer every day need to be
emphasised. Since young children have only acquired insufficient self control,
they are likely to be addicted to computers, video games in particular. Spending
too much time on computer games, children will lose their interest in studying as
well as communicating with their peers. Moreover, their values and perspectives of
the real world might not be well developed once they fall in love with the technical
world, which will have a detrimental influence on their future. Again, using computers
for long hours has both physical and psychological effects that would be more
destructive for young children.
Ergo,computers are helpful to youngsters study, that harmful effect bring more disadvantages.
It is acceptable that youngsters use computers two or three times a week, but parents
still need to be aware of the unhealthy information on the internet.
and video games addiction of their offspring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, still, well, in particular, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48581560284 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03208078846 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0760216277 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19489729524 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775601719926 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506350034154 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505510822296 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498923408761 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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