Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated.Does this machine
automation have more prons than cons.
Nowadays, most of work done through machine.Though,modern technology equipped us with machines.
However,there are positive and negative effects of these machines on the individual and the society,
which I shall highlight in this essay.Overall the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly,on the positive side, machines are faster, more convenient and energy saving. Furthermore,
households and industries are depends on machines. In addition, personal use of machines gives people
more free time to spend with family and pursue individual hobbies. Secondly, industrial use of machines
can reduces manpower for work and augment output.For example, packaging heavy machinery packing 300
per minute which automatically reduce work for number of employees.Moreover, computer machines manage people
banks information, air ticket and many more.Mainly, it mostly uses in hospital for surgery, data of medical
and healthcare.Though, benefites are more.
On the negative side, machine reduce the need of manual work, which can lead to unemployment especially
in the development countries.Though,working through heavy machinery creats jeopardy effects on
workers while working and getting injuries.Other negative effects of machines are on health.In addition,
Mainly housewives depends on machines for the household works.Though, many works required human touch.
For example, machine can not done work like artisans.Machine can do the work of thousand men but machine
can not do work like an men.
Ergo, the positive effects of machines outweight the negative effects on individual or society. However,
in developing countries required number of machines to do work it's mostly beneficial but may it will
reduce the number work done through people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05928853755 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51488977856 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.774542019 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.3 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196235813901 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814349688644 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491006601607 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069854518327 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377738403241 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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