The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crimes.
Why do you think that is?
Do you think the news should be a balance of both good news and bad news?
News has become ubiquitous in today’s world. Technology advancement has made it possible to fosters to spread the news within a minute or less. The conundrum is most of the media broadcasting negatives news such as social wars, natural calamities, felony and mishaps. In my opinion, it is important to highlight the bad news but positive news should be given equal importance.
To begin with, negative news are more entertaining and grab the attention of public is obvious. This reaction has capacity to increase the publication reputation in the market. In addition to, live news are in demand, people are acknowledge about live incidents such as border military forces, fire accidents and catastrophe. For instance the New York times had broadcasted the live footage of the world trade centre being destroyed, since then it became the top news channel of the America. In this way more and more started to record and telecast the live programs and got undisputed attention from the viewers.
In my perception, news channels should tackle all the issues from corrupt government to successful charity services. Tragic stories are to be remind us about more responsibilities, it get us motivated to change the better world. As the same way good news give the new hope and boost the confidence level. Bringing readers attention towards positive news not merely make them feel optimistic and to encourage them to do in right direction.
To summarize, both good and bad news are should be given equal importance, it help to shape up people’s prospective and aid them to stay safe and informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14828897338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86500324211 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6608301102 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393408824582 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131462624888 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863903718981 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245409953323 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810894286709 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.