Advertising is modern art and key part of modern business. Some multi national companies sponsor sports events in order to advertise their products. Some individuals have positive opinions and others believe that there are certain downsides to this. In my opinion, when companies sponsor sports events it is more advantageous for them and sports.
To begin with, the most obvious advantage is that companies can tell us about their products, without it we have fewer choices. For instance, most of the people know about Nike and Adidas on the television adverts. Furthermore, players can focus on sports instead of being distracted by financial worries. If players feel financially secured and maintain professional sports to be high quality and great entertainment. To illustrate, if a major company sponsor an event,it is much likely to get prime television coverage, which bringing in greater advertising revenue and exposing more people to the sports. This will in bring more fans, improve the profitability of sports club, which helps the economy and receive the community spirit when team performing well. Advertising is a creative industry that employs many people, without it there will be higher unemployment.
On the other hand, there are certain drawbacks to this. It may deflect the attention of people from sports to products. i addition when adds are shown during the sporting event, it dampen the spirit and enthusiasm of the spectators. Apart from this, sports players nowadays have been involved in illegal activities, because of it sports are not true medium for promotion. For example, many cricket players facing legal chargers for taking bribes from gamblers. Some people argue that spending money on sports events, country is just wasting the money it can be utilized to fulfill the basic needs like food, education and health.
To summarise , even though product adverts have some demerits, but is beneficial for both multi national companies and sports events, promoted to great extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33228840125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6665443901 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4242032334 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220329504436 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711845072299 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582582325283 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151661022252 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659398750973 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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