Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
It is irrefutable that nowadays childhood ailments are become consequential issues around in the world if we not treat properly. Many countries, children are dying in order to lack of immunise problem. Hence, it should be an obligation for parents to immunise their children against childhood diseases while other says who can prevent with the help of natural remedies and their rights to choose immunise for their babies whether require or not. I am of the opinion that this mater should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
Firstly, in this modern era, there are plethora of healthcare equipment, medicines and vaccinations are available in the market even though, children are affecting health issues due to poor healthcare system in some other countries and people do not aware of vaccines due to their ill iteration. For instance, in Africa, many children are dying on their day to day life and world healthcare organisation survey report is saying 17% people are dying on every year. Secondly, children are so vulnerable and who are all our future of nations and our responsibilities to protect them from ill.
On the other hand, Some people believe from the natural remedies rather than vaccines, still many village people who are all following this system and they don't ready to accept the vaccination in order to their culture. Another problem is join family, their grandparents always suggest to go with natural remedies for their grand children because they are following from multiple generations and their main fat is they do not have a money to spend to get vaccines. For example, In China, there are many villages are following only natural medicines from 1000 generations and people who stand in queue to get it this one.
To conclude this, even though natural remedies available also, government has to take a responsibilities to provide vaccines for less amount to prevent all the children from bacteria and virus to make and grow their life happily without any ailments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to immunise'
Suggestion: to immunise
...ral remedies and their rights to choose immunise for their babies whether require or not...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are all following this system and they dont ready to accept the vaccination in orde...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest going', 'suggest gonna'.
Suggestion: suggest going; suggest gonna
... join family, their grandparents always suggest to go with natural remedies for their grand c...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
... and their main fat is they do not have a money to spend to get vaccines. For example, ...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a responsibility' or simply 'responsibilities'?
Suggestion: a responsibility; responsibilities
... available also, government has to take a responsibilities to provide vaccines for less amount to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07250755287 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6676788482 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534743202417 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1780498282 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.636363636 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307255496946 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117036254137 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116225716828 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187407994031 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158039414173 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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