Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common disease or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Using vaccines as a helpful method to prevent a lot of diseases , especially beneficial for children. While some people argue families have their own right to decide whether immunize their kids or not , I believe that a law should be made to force this happen.
There are a lot of parents who do not have knowledge about vaccines , so it will be less possible for them initially immunize their children . In some rural places such as small villages where all older generations living on farming, people might have not heard about vaccines before . How do those parents to choose protect next generation if they do not know there is another option for being healthier ? If government did not set a law to support it , there would be many children die for common diseases which can be prevented before by using vaccines .
At the same time, a law can increase people's cognition about the public health which leads to more funds to the development of vaccines and then decreases the prices . When facing high prices of vaccines , Some parents might perceive that it is low chance for their children affected with the specific disease , so that they might choose not immunize which might cause tragedy and make them regret later on their life . Government can set a law and invest into the vaccines industry which can give more children a brighter future .
In conclusion, all parents want their children grow with health and happiness . Sometimes , they make some negative decision like not immunize their kids , not because they do not love them, just because they lack of knowledge or difficulties on financial. Here is the reason why government should stand out and set law to help them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87762237762 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46727428706 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9422191454 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313865370504 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12156942944 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833457275985 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207854832808 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893001353601 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.