You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letterDescribe the situationExplain why you cannot continue your course at this timeSa

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e evening course due to my busy schedule . During this three months course , I lea...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hedule . During this three months course , I learned a lot of useful knowledge abo...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...which are super helpful in my daily work . As I told you before , I work as an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...my daily work . As I told you before , I work as an it engineer in a bank tech...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'it'?
Suggestion: an; it
... . As I told you before , I work as an it engineer in a bank technology centre wh...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
... As I told you before , I work as an it engineer in a bank technology centre where the w...
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Suggestion: .
... class to learn more financial knowledge . But recently , our team have started a ...
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... more financial knowledge . But recently , our team have started a new project whi...
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... huge market data to compute stocks risk . For the last two weeks , in order to ke...
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Suggestion: ,
...ute stocks risk . For the last two weeks , in order to keep progress , after cours...
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Suggestion: ,
...st two weeks , in order to keep progress , after course , I had to work till mid-n...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in order to keep progress , after course , I had to work till mid-night , sometime...
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Suggestion: ,
...er course , I had to work till mid-night , sometime even to 2am in the morning whi...
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Suggestion: .
...o 2am in the morning which burned me out . So , I think it will be better that I c...
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Suggestion: ,
... in the morning which burned me out . So , I think it will be better that I can fo...
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... which I hope to finish the whole course . I know there is an online course suppli...
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Suggestion: .
...erial which I would like to take part in . Could you give me more details about it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34825870647 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22422685838 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2951316055 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202223184597 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771229978738 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529861528503 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143291154786 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435770327305 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.