Online, people write opinions and reviews of services. Is it a good thing or bad thing.?
Due to Internet developing with an alarming speed, more and more people choose to shopping online and write their views after they get the products or services . In my personal opinion, writing feedback is not only beneficial for customers but also for businessmen.
To begin with , reviews of products can definitely help those who have not tried the products before by providing more information beyond the official introduction from salesman. Compare with the details given by shoppers , consumers' opinion are neutral and more real which could give other people a true story about some specific features including both bad and good sides. For instance, When you want to buy a laptop, the wise thing to do is visit Amazon to check all the data from producers as well as all the customers' review . If most of the reviews were negative , it would be not worth to take risk to try .
At the same time, customers' opinions on products can also help sellers to improve qualities and services then to be better and get more profits . No matter how considerate and functional products are , there are always space for improving especially for new one. On one side , producers will be motivated by high reviews which reward their hard working . For another side , producers know the deficits of the products from the negative opinions , then they can upgrade those products to win in the markets .
In conclusion , giving reviews after using products or experiencing the services is benefit to everyone which should be encourage . So we will enjoy a better , higher quality services .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0153256705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60042089095 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3673238317 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160065390832 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513416491718 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375035711241 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893049939086 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567754150612 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.