Many cities suffer from traffic-related problems. What problems does traffic cause in cities and what are the possible solutions?
Nowadays, more jobs and more facilities are available in urban areas. It makes people immigrate to cities and turns the cities as densely populated areas. These densities cause some major traffic problems in such cities. Traffic jams have some negative effects on people who are living in those big cities and the environment. So, some solutions should be considered to overcome the problems. In this essay traffic problems and some solutions that could be helpful will be discussed.
In big cities, air pollution or traffic jams are significant problems which are mainly caused by cars and traffic-related problems. Contamination in big cities is an important factor which has increased health issues. Studies have shown that in metropolises, people have struggled with some health disease such as lung cancer and heart attacks more than any other cities. Without a doubt, those kind of problems are mainly related to environmental pollution. For example, in Tehran the capital of Iran, where the population is more than ten billions! People are faced a lot of serious health problems by air pollution. Some senior citizens who have a critical respiratory disease in such cities are forced by their families to immigrate to other small cities or even rural areas in order to have longer life. Furthermore, more traffic jams can create stress in people’s lives. People have to wake up early and leave their home two or three hours sooner to go to work because of the rush hours in the morning. As a result, they have less time for sleeping which can make their life stressful. So, traffic not only could damage to the environment but also has a crucial role in people’s lifestyle and their health.
On the other hand, some solutions should be considered to avoid problems. Governments and people both should be responsible for these kinds of issues. First of all, Governments can enact rules for preventing cars using and encouraging people to use public transportation. For instance, road tax should be increased, and public transport fares should be decreased, they should be as low as possible. Moreover, states can assign more budgets and money to car manufacture for making cars which are environmentally friendly. Electric engine cars can be a good alternative to fossil fuel-based cars which contribute more to air pollution. Secondly, individuals in a society should take care of traffic issue and its problems. It is better that people use their cars in a necessary situation and avoid using in unnecessary situations. Some young people prefer to use their cars for hanging on with their friends or get some short distances which cause traffic jams. Instead of using cars for such unnecessary purposes they could use other alternatives such as subway or bicycle which not only is healthier but is also cost-efficient. Reducing the number of vehicles allowed into cities or people’s self-awareness about their roles and responsibilities in a society can decrease the level of air pollution and other related problems dramatically.
In conclusion, living in big cities are stressful, and traffic jam is a big problem, but there are some solutions to overcome. Problems like air pollution and traffic jams are undeniable is such cities however governments and people might manage their society in order to have less traffic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...than any other cities. Without a doubt, those kind of problems are mainly related to envir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2808.0 1615.20841683 174% => OK
No of words: 543.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17127071823 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86520186921 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46408839779 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4482603989 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8275862069 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.724137931 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.20689655172 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208375933488 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725565431278 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735705728362 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185008071771 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755310842586 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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